Xprett_y_zelX

To all my TRANSPORTED readers, it is baccckkkk! Check it out, and let me hear your thoughts! \^o^/

-MULANDI

LETS GOOOO WE R SO BACK !!! Also for the late reply am so sarreh. school sucks and 1 week yung sports fest namin BAHAHAHHAHAHAHA
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Xprett_y_zelX

magcomment kayo plsss. kinakabahan tuloy ako huhu
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Xprett_y_zelX

To all my TRANSPORTED readers, it is baccckkkk! Check it out, and let me hear your thoughts! \^o^/

-MULANDI

LETS GOOOO WE R SO BACK !!! Also for the late reply am so sarreh. school sucks and 1 week yung sports fest namin BAHAHAHHAHAHAHA
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Xprett_y_zelX

magcomment kayo plsss. kinakabahan tuloy ako huhu
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-MULANDI

BABYGIRLLLLLLL KAMUSTA KA NAAA

-MULANDI

@Xprett_y_zelX HUY I'LL ALWAYS REMEMBER YOU (⁠.⁠ ⁠❛⁠ ⁠ᴗ⁠ ⁠❛⁠.⁠) Ikaw lang yung nag iisang author na nagsulat ng Aot x Naruto na tinatanggap ko ಥ⁠‿⁠ಥ 
            
            Also don't worry about not updating (ako den hindi na naguupdate wjhsbwhs) just focus on the things you need to do and yourself na den. Goodluck sa college omg !! I'm wishing you all the best ate (⁠≧⁠▽⁠≦⁠)
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Xprett_y_zelX

Still can't believe na may nakakaalala sakin ditooo okay lang ako mhieee. I miss you narin huhu. I hope na nasa mabuti ka ring lagay ngayonn!
            
            di ko na alam kung kailan kong last na binuksan tong acc ko. I can't update narin kasi super busy talagaa (working student). Nung una akong nagsulat ng fanfiction ko gr12 palang ako, but now 3rd yr college na huhuu.
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Xprett_y_zelX

Lmao. I can't believe it literally took me 3 fvcking moths to finished the chapter 25. I just hope y'all are hype with my story. The story line for the next chapter will follow the female titan arc. Expect a looooonger chapter. That's my gift for you guys!(☆▽☆)

Xprett_y_zelX

@hassuwo ayeeee salamatttt kaso nahihiya ako HAHAHAHAH and baka wala kang maintindihan kase about naruto at attack on titan HAHAHAHABA
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jssoaaa

@Xprett_y_zelX hii will read na po stories nyo omoo!!! ♡♡
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Xprett_y_zelX

Welp༼;´༎ຶ ۝ ༎ຶ༽  I've been making draft for chapter 25 for the last 4 days but until now I only have 500 words lol. What's worse is that- I think I have to rewrite it again because I'm losing my writing technique (know what I'm saying?) it's boring, and it's like I'm slipping to my original plot. Plus I don't have much time to write since we have online classes every fvcking week unlike when I was in Senior High. College is a real deal(no kidding) especially when I'm taking Engineering (Calculus will be the cause of my death.)
          
          Why can't I just be a disappointment in the family? Ya' know... No school, no work, no chores, just writing and being a black sheep. ಥ‿ಥ

nyctophilun

I was about to write a comment in "Transported" but it's waaayyy longer than I thought. So, I thought it'll fit better if I post it here. So... here you go... 
          
          I'd really love to see how the story goes. I mean, It's not every day you see a fanfiction in Wattpad with perfect grammar and well-thought-out plot. 
          
          When you mentioned that some people are confused, I can't deny that. 
          
          At one point, I did get lost in some parts, probably because I've never actually watched AOT (I've been planning to, okay? but there's this thing called "school"), but I think I got the main grasp of it. 
          
          Perhaps, it's because of the long paragraphs? Some people tend to avoid, skip, or fast read through paragraphs like those. I think that's why, although you described it perfectly, some readers get confused. 
          
          Actually, idrk, I'm more of a reader than a writer. Don't take my advice too seriously. 
          
          Overall, it's a great read. Don't get discouraged from those comments. Thank you for writing it and please, keep up the good work!
          
          (btw pardon my grammar mistakes if there are any) 
          

Xprett_y_zelX

To think that you made effort to put a good review about my work, really flutters my heart! Thank you! I think I can find a better strategy to that paragraph thingy. (。•̀ᴗ-)✧ Thanks for cheering me up! I hope you'll have a good day! (Tomorrow? Co'z it's night here hehe.)
            
            Anyway, don't worry about your grammar, it's really good!(◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。
            
            Thank you for reading! Luv yah!
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