XrubylouiseX

So, about my comment a few days ago- instead of fixing grammar mistakes, I'm rewriting all of the chapters! And your probably thinking, why is Candles and Curses unpublished too? That's only because of the amount of corrections I have to address. Basically, my grammar in  book one wasn't even that bad, it's just that I forgot to mention many things that made the ending make sense. By that, I mean like- I didn't feel like it was realistic, and I like my stories being slightly real. Because really, if someone has died- no one will probably just forget about it straight away? ( Well, I wouldn't.) And I just want to overall build the characters personalities up more, like more lines of dialogue. Anyways, thanks for seeing this and yea!

XrubylouiseX

So, about my comment a few days ago- instead of fixing grammar mistakes, I'm rewriting all of the chapters! And your probably thinking, why is Candles and Curses unpublished too? That's only because of the amount of corrections I have to address. Basically, my grammar in  book one wasn't even that bad, it's just that I forgot to mention many things that made the ending make sense. By that, I mean like- I didn't feel like it was realistic, and I like my stories being slightly real. Because really, if someone has died- no one will probably just forget about it straight away? ( Well, I wouldn't.) And I just want to overall build the characters personalities up more, like more lines of dialogue. Anyways, thanks for seeing this and yea!

XrubylouiseX

I was writing some flicker facts about my au and I realized I messed up. When i was writing about Annie, I had to go back and check what her birthday was as it was mentioned in book one while talking to Trey. She stated that she was turning 18 in a few days, but this is were I got confused. In book 2, I believe in chapter 2 I mentioned about all the competitiors being in year 11. But, that is not possible if your 17 or 18. 
          
          So, when reading that point in book 2, remember this: 
          
          Not all of them were in year 11, some older than others. For example, in book one- Ally was the oldest as she was 18 turning 19 in January. So she was an adult. 
          
          But the youngest was KimLy, who was 15. 
          
          So when I mention that in book 2, please remember that not all of the characters were in year 11. Some were older, some younger.  
          
          Ages while being in the competition: 
          KIMLY: 15 
          ALLY: 18 
          ANNIE: 17 
          TREY: 17 
          AUSTIN: 16 
          CHARLIE: 16 
          JAMILA: 16 
          ALEX: 16 
          LARA: 17
          VINNY: 16 
          JORDAN: 17 
          COLLEEN: 18 
          ELIZABETH: 16 
          ALBERT: 16 
          REZA: 17 
          ELAINA: 16 
          DAN: 18 
          SABRINA: " 18 " 
          
          So really, the only one who was in year 11 was KimLy. As all of the 16 year olds have been that age for a while and are turning seventeen. 
          
          Cant believe I'm just realising this now, so if I mention ages this is the real thing!

XrubylouiseX

Just finished writing the next 4 chapters, just going over them now! I must say Im very excited to finish this story because I absolutely love the ending. Also, I'm making some cover art for my books! ( Very excited for that I must say.) 
          
          Have a nice day ☺