XrubylouiseX

It's my birthday..! ☺

XrubylouiseX

@IamThy_REDGEM ah it's okay twin! Tysm
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IamThy_REDGEM

im SO sorry for being 2 days late but happy birthday !!!
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XrubylouiseX

It's my birthday..! ☺

XrubylouiseX

@IamThy_REDGEM ah it's okay twin! Tysm
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IamThy_REDGEM

im SO sorry for being 2 days late but happy birthday !!!
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XrubylouiseX

So, if you like flicker can you speak up on this. Do you prefer to get the point with the killing, or do you like side chapters with more chemistry between characters? This fandom is rather small on here now, and i want to please the last of us here. Don't be afraid to comment on this guys

XrubylouiseX

@XrubylouiseX thank you for the feedback, I was honestly thinking on doing this as I enjoy it more personally and feel like it really gives everyone a proper look at the characters. :) 
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LillyBroek

@XrubylouiseX 
            
            I prefer side chapters to get to know the characters better. It makes following the story a lot more engaging!
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XrubylouiseX

So, about my comment a few days ago- instead of fixing grammar mistakes, I'm rewriting all of the chapters! And your probably thinking, why is Candles and Curses unpublished too? That's only because of the amount of corrections I have to address. Basically, my grammar in  book one wasn't even that bad, it's just that I forgot to mention many things that made the ending make sense. By that, I mean like- I didn't feel like it was realistic, and I like my stories being slightly real. Because really, if someone has died- no one will probably just forget about it straight away? ( Well, I wouldn't.) And I just want to overall build the characters personalities up more, like more lines of dialogue. Anyways, thanks for seeing this and yea! 

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I was writing some flicker facts about my au and I realized I messed up. When i was writing about Annie, I had to go back and check what her birthday was as it was mentioned in book one while talking to Trey. She stated that she was turning 18 in a few days, but this is were I got confused. In book 2, I believe in chapter 2 I mentioned about all the competitiors being in year 11. But, that is not possible if your 17 or 18. 
          
          So, when reading that point in book 2, remember this: 
          
          Not all of them were in year 11, some older than others. For example, in book one- Ally was the oldest as she was 18 turning 19 in January. So she was an adult. 
          
          But the youngest was KimLy, who was 15. 
          
          So when I mention that in book 2, please remember that not all of the characters were in year 11. Some were older, some younger.  
          
          Ages while being in the competition: 
          KIMLY: 15 
          ALLY: 18 
          ANNIE: 17 
          TREY: 17 
          AUSTIN: 16 
          CHARLIE: 16 
          JAMILA: 16 
          ALEX: 16 
          LARA: 17
          VINNY: 16 
          JORDAN: 17 
          COLLEEN: 18 
          ELIZABETH: 16 
          ALBERT: 16 
          REZA: 17 
          ELAINA: 16 
          DAN: 18 
          SABRINA: " 18 " 
          
          So really, the only one who was in year 11 was KimLy. As all of the 16 year olds have been that age for a while and are turning seventeen. 
          
          Cant believe I'm just realising this now, so if I mention ages this is the real thing! 
          

XrubylouiseX

Just finished writing the next 4 chapters, just going over them now! I must say Im very excited to finish this story because I absolutely love the ending. Also, I'm making some cover art for my books! ( Very excited for that I must say.) 
          
          Have a nice day ☺