Xtremesis

@katllaurado I forgot to ask do you want a character in my story?  I thought I'd ask.  If you want a character just let me know what pokémon you want for the character physical traits etc.  

@Xtremesis that would probably be a good idea. I used to be all paper and then iPhones came around I became so digital. Gotta get ma mojo back!

@katllaurado you also ma y want to write your chapters on paper too.  That way you can take notes in the margins and you can circle things you may want to come back to.

@Xtremesis Thanks! It really does. I should probably jot my ideas down on paper. 

@katllaurado don't worry @JJFABBY will take care of the critiques.  As for the plot use an old spiral notebook or loose leaf paper to jot down ideas on your plot a characters.  Hope this helps

@Xtremesis That sounds wonderful! @JJFABBY If you could go over it possibly and give me some (A LOT) of critique I would appreciate it so much. I know I have grammar problems and too many repetitive ideas but that's mostly because I didn't do a proper outline. If you could help me out that would be great!

@Xtremesis @katllaurado DO NOT SPEAK THE DARK LORD'S NAME OR HE SHALL APPEAR- haha, yeah, I'm willing to if you want me too. And as for your story, Xtremesis... *switching into angry editor mode*

@katllaurado I currently have chapters 3-7 of my story written down on paper I just have to type them up.  Also if you want any help with your story I could have my friend @JJFABBY take a look at your story considering his Pokémon story is quite similar to yours.

@Xtremesis thanks! I really need to critique it though. It's too repetitive and I need to develop my characters better. Thanks though! I can't wait to check out your books as well

@katllaurado Your welcome.  Btw your War of the Dragon story is THE BEST!!  I wish my story was that good.