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@ThePayneTrain10 Anytime! Any questions, I'm always around.

@Xx1D_O2LxX lol thanks ill try!

@ThePayneTrain10 If I was gonna change this in any way, I would be more inside the mind of Addie. What does she think? How does she feel? What does she want? Things like that. Also, be more descriptive of the scenery and the characters! It helps the reader connect with the story and be able to picture the story in their mind. Just a few constructive tips from moi(:

Lol true true! I was just writing to see what people would think. But I'll continue writing this book and finish it, as long as you can give me pointers and tell me what you think about it. 

@ThePayneTrain10 Have some confidence! How do you expect to have a good story with low self-esteem?

@Xx1D_O2LxX okay thank you again. I really didn't think people would like it. 

@ThePayneTrain10 No problem! I don't mind doing that.

@Xx1D_O2LxX Thank you! Lol I will! Just keep me updated on how it's coming.

@ThePayneTrain10 No reason to be shocked! It's not like I'm a celebrity! But really, you should be proud. Keep up the good work!

Thanks you! I'm just so shocked that you actually liked it! I've never written a book before! Thank you so much!