@FeatherGuy hey, sure I have a small queue but should hopefully get to it this weekend (just took two days off of critiquing). I hope you don't mind the wait and thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Hi I'm sorry to do this but can you check out my story I just want to see if it's any good I just started to write down stuff there is a lot of mistakes just so you know
@FeatherGuy hey, sure I have a small queue but should hopefully get to it this weekend (just took two days off of critiquing). I hope you don't mind the wait and thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Can you please help me critique the first two chapters of my story, The Infinite Chain? I want to know the areas to work on so I could improve! Do vote if you are impressed. I read and commented on A Brilliant Mistake, and it was awesome! =)