XxClicheSpicexX

@FeatherGuy hey, sure I have a small queue but should hopefully get to it this weekend (just took two days off of critiquing). I hope you don't mind the wait and thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

assault_potato

Can you please help me critique the first two chapters of my story, The Infinite Chain? I want to know the areas to work on so I could improve! Do vote if you are impressed. I read and commented on A Brilliant Mistake, and it was awesome! =)