watermelonsushi

hey! i really like your dp :) its so pretty and i love anime too! :) anwyas, i was wondering if you had the time to check out my story License to Steal...Your Heart? your insight really means a lot to me :) thanks for your time,
          -Watermelonsushi :)

CreatingBalance_

hello, my name is brie and it's lovely to meet you. (: 
          i was just wondering if you could perhaps take a look at one of my stories? 
          i would greatly appreciate any feedback and would happily return the favour. 
          
          i was also wondering which one you think i should continue? i have four stories and it's getting a bit much continuing them all, you know? so if you have a particular favorite, it would be brilliant if you could help me out. :D 
          
          ▪ Carpe Diem 
          Ambrose is a Goddess, and Zeus' daughter. To help with her Goddess training, she had chosen to live among her people for a couple of weeks, or months at the most, but being a normal teenager is harder than she thought it would be; trouble is brewing beneath the Earth crust and Ambrose is in the middle of a war and remains to be the easy target. 
          
          ▪ The Revolution 
          Vampires are just a myth - right? Wrong. Ever since Edens sister has gone missing, her life has turned upside down, but will she survive when a legion of vampires threaten to destrong the human race? 
          
          ▪ Change of Fate 
          Maya and Eva are normal teeangers, or so they thought - they are half angel. A prophet has told that all three worlds - the realm of the living, hell and heaven - will be destroyed because of the neverending war between heaven and hell, but he has also predicted it is maya and eva that are the key to survival, but will they beat hells army? (made it to #11 on whats hot list) 
          
          ▪ Bitter Salvation 
          James, Emmeline, Sienna, Harry and Noelle are brothers and sisters with a dark secret; they are vampires, of sorts. In need to survive, they must drain humans of their life force, but these teeenagers respect life - they do not want to be monsters. They leave their home in order of a better life, but when their evil mother comes to drag them back, will everyone be safe?

Aetila

Hey there! 
          If you've got some extra, bored, time; I was wondering if you could read one of my stori es and comment on it! (voting , fanning, and whatever are all optional, its the reviews I need!) I'd love to return the favor, and I will! 
          I know this might annoy you, but anything is greatly appreciated! Thanks for reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Golden Dawn; Karis Gebelin was just your typical Hawaii transplant to Manhattan, obsessive top student who actually procrastinates everything, and bound of Ivy; future careerist and current fortune teller. Until-- that is--she finds out everything she aced is more or less a ben trevato-- so good bye model student and striving socialite--and hello demons layer/alchemist and automatic industry tycoon--that is, if she survives. 
          
          Pride, Prestige, and The Undead-- When Aislinn LeBlanc went to boarding school, she expected to be working hard and standing out with her scholastic honors and economist talents in a sea of high-society spoiled brats in their opulent playground. Little did the senator's daughter know, however, that she was entering a world where your rich and famous can kill, slaughter, and hack things like no one's business.African mythology, action, and secrets of success all come together in this tale of zombieslaying and prestige. 
          
          Empire Wars-- Kiers was fed up with his life in a small town in Iowa--until, that is, when he and his friends are offered to risk life and mind to test a new breakthrough "video game." Empire Wars was designed to be the most difficult game in the world, where dying is just too easy.
          
          P.S. I know you get a lot of these, but I'll say it; I really don't think my main characters are Mary Sues & Gary Stus, they aren't gorgeous, extremely talented, maybe have one talent, but that's it. My stories also are not centered around one cliche relationship between two gorgeous people or whatever, and I really hope you can try comment! 
          Thank you for the time!