Dimity April Vicki

hello. (: 
          i know this is going to be a very irritating message, but i really need your help. see, i know people don't particularly like twilight anymore becuse it is totally over-rated - and i totally agree - but i just posted this fanfiction and i was wondering if you think i should continue? 
          
          if you don't like twilight, then feel free to ignore this, but i would really appreciate it. basically, i wrote it ages ago and i recently found it, so i decided to post it. 
          
          i promise is it's not a typical story; the storyline isn't half bad, so i would seriously appreciate any feedback. 
          
          although, please, if you could; some proper critisicm and improvements are much needed. im o wattpad to become better, not to go offline with some 'interesting' comments. so, please... fire the critisicm at me; il take it and deal with it. (: 
          
          thankyou, ever so much, 
          creatingbalance_ 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/487765-echoing-sunlight

HI...i hope that you could read my story on..." A story of twisted fate(an immortal story)the past, present and future. When dreams turn to be real" and a poem on “love and hate” and "silent love" read other poems if u have the time.
          please comment, fan and vote....your comment means a lot to me....thanks.
          PLS READ THE POEM ON” SILENT LOVE”…comment 

hey i'm just wondering if your not busy if you could check out a story i'm  writing at the mo. 
          
          its a typical boy/girl/ crazyness ensues kind a story, and would appreciate  anything from a vote to becoming a fan! 
          
          thanks! 
          
          and i'll definitely read your stories

ha ha ha people can only read it when i decide to write my chapter ha ha 

Hey, will you please read my story?:) I would really appreciate it.