XxHawaii99xX

hii... will miss you too... tc girl! <3

@XxHawaii99xX awesome girl!!!:D:D

@vickyv hey guys, i have been away almost all summer with no or at least very little internet access. I will be uploading soon, i promise! I go home tomorrow and will start working once again  cant wait to start writing again

@XxHawaii99xX dont loose confidence!! come on update soon!

Hey I just tried to send you a pm with this but whattpad said there was an error so I don't know if you got my message or not. Anyway, here is the cover :) I wasn't sure how to send it to you so I put it on my photo bucket page and you should be able to download it from there :)
          
          http://i1335.photobucket.com/albums/w662/SophHLM/Desktop1-001_zpsdca98f72.jpg

Hey guys! I know most, in not all of you must have given up on reading this book, and to be honest, I had too, after reading books on this site, and hearing about people being published made me lose confidence in myself. I am still working on the story, and now that summer is here, and after an amazing book, I am going to start writing again! I am so excited! Please tell me what you think. Cant wait 

okay, so sorry its been so long since my last update...I have been so stressed with exams and stuff, I am not making excuses, I will try and have the next chapter up by Monday at the very latest. I love you all! And I really appreciate all of your cooperation, and patience. I really hope at least one of you still has confidence in me <3

@XxHawaii99xX thanks for following me babeXX IF there's anything I can do for you let me know ;) *muah*

@soapbubblepopper LOL I use Word to write, it correct mostly all of my mistakes! Wattpad does none of that, and I have read some really good grammarical stories, and I have read some bad ones, I prefer good grammar not bad! 

@XxHawaii99xX  awesome! It has a really interesting start, you could maybe write the kiss scene up, maybe have the two "couples" go on a double date or something and just put at the start 2 weeks later. 
          
          I know how it can be when you want to progress the story onwards but advice my friend gave me when I was writing a scene in my book is that it is always better to stretch out the stories progression.
          
          I would also suggest you add a little more description of how the characters look, especially when you first meet the two guys.
          
          Other than that it is really good, you have excellent gramma and spelling which is often rare on whattpad! I would also recommend reading this, it really helped me http://www.wattpad.com/11644575-wattpad-fantasy-writer%27s-advice#.UYU3vyt4aXM