Deep4141

Hi, how’s it going?  
          I uploaded Chapters 4 and 5 of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" . I would very much like it if u could read them and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :)) I will return the favor for your works. Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)  Here's the link to my story- 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/500304-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right  
          

HappyBerry

Hey, I'm writing a romance novel called Faster Than This. It's not cliche, nor sappy (or at least I don't think so) with a slight twist to it. I hope you'll take the time to check it out (:
          
          Here's the description
          
          Riley meets Alan on a foggy autumn day in the park half filled with yellow and red leaves. He is everything she wants to be, and he is everything she hates. Things move quickly as she falls into a deep spiraling circle filled with endless images of him. In her school, her work and even her home. Can things move any faster than this?