Hey Leah! You asked me to give your story a read and so far so good. At the moment I dont have a alot to say about it as there is only one part up, but the further you get into the more Ill have to say :) You gonna have to put decriptions of people and their looks. But like I said only first part.
Tell when you upload and Ill give it a read :). Oh and glad you like my stories :)