What looks better?
1.
I couldn't believe my eyes, it was empty. The city is usually packed but now there's no-one and nothing. Now I'm unsettled.
Speaker 1: where is everyone?! Anyone!?
Speaker 2: will you shut up!? I can hear you just fine.
Jumping almost out of my skin I turn and see another person behind me, the first one all day. She doesn't look friendly though, I think I'd rather be alone again.
Speaker 1: who are you?
Speaker 2: why I'm you of course.
OR
2.
I couldn't believe my eyes, it was empty. The city is usually packed around now but now there's no-one and nothing. Now I'm unsettled." Where is everyone!? Anyone?! I shouted in near desperation. A new voice sounds out from behind me "will you shut up?! I can hear you just fine."
Nearly jumping out of my skin I turn around and see the only other person I've seen today, she doesn't look too friendly though. I think I'd rather be alone again. " who are you?" I say, trying to sound brave. She starts to smile in a rather diabolical way" why I'm you of course"
I'm trying to decide if I should change my writing style since I'm not sure I like mine, though I can't make up my mind.