Xx_RainbowRose_xX

@Greed_Avaricious That's ok :)

MetisRebel

Saw your plea for a crit when I was booing around. Much as I'm not a werewolf reader I read a few lines and it does look pretty good at the outset. Lots of good emotional tugging.
          
          If you want a crit, just send me a line and let me know if I can help you with this. I don't hold back on good writers.