Xxmeh_xX

I was wondering if anyone could please read the first chapter of my book I just published and give me some sort of criticism. I'm still trying to edit some parts, but it would be big help for me since I'm still trying to see if I'm gonna go through with finishing it. (っ◔◡◔)っ ♥ Thanks for listening ♥

Xxmeh_xX

Thank you :)
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Toastbur_com

@Xxmeh_xX Yes absolutely, I will read it ^w^
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Xxmeh_xX

I was wondering if anyone could please read the first chapter of my book I just published and give me some sort of criticism. I'm still trying to edit some parts, but it would be big help for me since I'm still trying to see if I'm gonna go through with finishing it. (っ◔◡◔)っ ♥ Thanks for listening ♥

Xxmeh_xX

Thank you :)
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Toastbur_com

@Xxmeh_xX Yes absolutely, I will read it ^w^
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Xxmeh_xX

If you have any advice, comments, ideas, or just wanna talk put it here, thanks for listening!

Xxmeh_xX

@AestheticJool I've watched dororo but I'm in the process of Naruto. But I just hate how many characters are dying
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ReeCreation

@Xxmeh_xX  cool . :)
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Xxmeh_xX

@ReeCreation thanks for the recommendation I'll try to watch it
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