@Uroldfriend
Hey, sorry for taking awhile to respond to you. I’m quitting wattpad and focusing more on my art and videos.
Anyway, to start off. You need to build up in the Yanderes lover in the story, make them likable and relatable. Make us care for them and see why the Yandere would want to be with them. As for the Yandere, they can be normal or that one quiet kid in school. Make them likable as well and try to explain on why they’re obsessed with the love of their life. If it’s a one shots book. Try to summarize the story and be willing to give a dark ending. No need to be sweet.
Like my very first. It’s deleted. But when it was up. It had a really sappy ending which makes me cringe to this very day. No need to sugarcoat anything when it comes to the endings.
But, hey that’s my advice. Hope it helps^^