Joseph112348
hEY THIS IS jOSEPH112348 AND i JUST WANNA THANK YOU FOR READING THIS STORY THAT i'VE TRIED MY BEST WRITING ON SINCE THIS WAS MY FIRST STORY TO WRITE. dO YOU HAVE ANY COMMENTS FOR THE FIRST HALF OF THE STORY AS SOME OF THE STUFF WAS MY FIRST TIME OF WRITING AND IT MAY BE SLOPPY OR OUT OF PLACE FOR EXPERIENCE READERS AS i'VE GOTTEN A COUPLE COMMENTS ON HOW MUCH i NEED TO FIX MY WRITING.