YOLOwriting101

@Erikamilesz12009 - I saw you asked me something here, but you may have deleted it? It was something about enemies to…I couldn’t see the rest of it in my notifications. 
          	
          	Do you mind telling me what it was still? I don’t mind hearing what it was~ (^з^)-☆ If not, that’s fine too. I just wanted you to know it’s okay to ask me stuff, I don’t mind.

Erikamilesz12009

I don’t know how to explain it in words, I guess I can say it just feels like I’m dragging the story slowly with the chapters almost like a slow burn but it’s not that trope. And thank you for the tip I’ll take it into consideration!
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YOLOwriting101

@Erikamilesz12009 - I see. Hmm…well a good way to start off sometimes is to either make it known off the rip of the conflict at hand, or can start with how/why they became enemies in the first place. There can be a point where as enemies; they have to come together for something where they have to put aside their issues for this moment, then with time - their hatred changes? There are all kinds of ways, it just depends on how you go about it. 
          	  
          	  How is your pacing slow, if you don’t mind me asking. How are you going about it?
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Erikamilesz12009

Hello! I was wondering about your opinion on how to start an enemies to lovers off? I feel like my pacing is too slow when writing
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Winter_Wolf2_0

Heyyo- some of your chapters in Savagely Inhabited are out of order. Just thought I'd give you a heads up!

Winter_Wolf2_0

@YOLOwriting101 No problem! I had that problem once too and I was glad to catch it. No idea what causes it, but yeah. You're still very welcome!
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YOLOwriting101

@Winter_Wolf2_0 - really? Oh man, thanks for letting me know. I just checked right when I saw this message and it was in the correct order…hmm, I will try to see if I need to just rearrange them a little again just to be safe. 
            
            Thanks again tho! <3
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MaliFanai1

author, when's the next update for 'His stepfather, dearest' and ' Savagely Inhibited'?

YOLOwriting101

@MaliFanai1 - I have updated both of those stories today! I hope you enjoy~✨
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YOLOwriting101

@MaliFanai1 - those two will be updated around the same time. In less than two days, for sure.
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YOLOwriting101

@Erikamilesz12009 - I saw you asked me something here, but you may have deleted it? It was something about enemies to…I couldn’t see the rest of it in my notifications. 
          
          Do you mind telling me what it was still? I don’t mind hearing what it was~ (^з^)-☆ If not, that’s fine too. I just wanted you to know it’s okay to ask me stuff, I don’t mind.

Erikamilesz12009

I don’t know how to explain it in words, I guess I can say it just feels like I’m dragging the story slowly with the chapters almost like a slow burn but it’s not that trope. And thank you for the tip I’ll take it into consideration!
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YOLOwriting101

@Erikamilesz12009 - I see. Hmm…well a good way to start off sometimes is to either make it known off the rip of the conflict at hand, or can start with how/why they became enemies in the first place. There can be a point where as enemies; they have to come together for something where they have to put aside their issues for this moment, then with time - their hatred changes? There are all kinds of ways, it just depends on how you go about it. 
            
            How is your pacing slow, if you don’t mind me asking. How are you going about it?
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Erikamilesz12009

Hello! I was wondering about your opinion on how to start an enemies to lovers off? I feel like my pacing is too slow when writing
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nysha006

Author pls what happened to savagely inhibited?

nysha006

@nysha006 so excited...thank you
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YOLOwriting101

@nysha006 - it’s back, btw. ✨
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nysha006

@nysha006 okay...take your time we'll be waiting
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Banchanstoes

Who is that on your profile picture TvT

Banchanstoes

@YOLOwriting101 oh zhenya? Yh the plot used to be nice but then they ruined it with the grape :( I mainly stuck for taekjoo
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YOLOwriting101

@Banchanstoes - oh yeah, they were. It was the blond dude from Codename Anastasia. I don’t like the plot at all and just so happened to use that picture. :/
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Banchanstoes

@YOLOwriting101 ooh yh I saw it was by BWAT so I know it’s good U3U I just got confused for a second because of a comment but they could’ve been referring to your old profile
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im_one_out

this message may be offensive 
SHIT I don't know why I can't comment on your "His Beta of Sub" anyway that won't stop me tho nice try Wattpad←⁠_⁠←...
          
          This is going to be a whole part bitch so stay with me..
          
          1• Theo the mother is A BITCH, I know how that sounds awful but let me finish. He DID see a differencsss in his son's behavior the day Ezra asked the kids to shift back when he was playing as dead to see if they cared or not...he immediately knew "Oh he acting all mature I hope it's not because of blah blah" MOTHER FUCKER you knewwww you left him out stfu go die.
          
          2• That bitch collector Alpha of his "his husband" is a fucked up trash and his older brother knew about it all but what could he do? I mean the day I saw how he acted toward his older brother I washed my hands he was a lost cost to me and his older son is the other side of the mirror his older son is JUST like him a brat, spoiled, ungrateful I don't give a FUCK how fucked up your childhood but to act just like the 'fucked up parents' that you suppose to hate so much? Hypocrisy at its finest. They should be more kind to others since they know the pain of being an ASS to others because of their families but nahlet'ss bitch up about everything.
          
          3• The other two siblings oh I have some to them to them bitches actibg like "oh but daddy its all your fault we HATED our older brother becuse we saw you so we did as you did" hoe Istg them bitches lying in front of our ugly FACES UGHHHHHHHAAAA they literally said "HE WAS OUR OLDER BROTHER WE PLAY TOGETHER WHEN WE WERE KIDS" bitch? If your dumb brain recognaized him as an older brothaaaaaa theb wtfff your father had to to with anything with your change of behaviour around him? YOU chose to be an ASS just becuse "our mom didn't say anythink" SO YOU KNEW no body will open their mouth so countined?  Wooooooow.

YOLOwriting101

@im_one_out - also, I’m not sure why you couldn’t type in the book, the app is glitchy sometimes - if you’re on the app. And the grammar mistakes is fine, don’t worry - I still got what you were trying to say.
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YOLOwriting101

@im_one_out - this was lovely to read. I’m happy you were able to say how you truly felt - because they are a messy bunch. This was great, thank you for typing it. ✨<3
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im_one_out

I now see I had a lot of grammar mistakes but...my anger issues said hi so(⁠◕⁠ᴗ⁠◕⁠✿⁠)
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MaliFanai1

author when's the update for 'In His Taste'?

YOLOwriting101

@MaliFanai1 - hello! I was actually thinking about unpublishing it and publishing it back when I update it more frequently. Since I’m more focused on “His Omega of Domination” and almost done with it. I’m not too sure, but I’ll probably do that.
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