YagamiArashi-sama

I guess I'm back?

MwMwLizard

Hey author!! Sorry for popping up like this, but could you take some time to read my story? 
          
          you'd be a great help and I'd really appreciate it <3
          
          And of course I'll read, vote  and support all of your works too. 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/347294121-return-of-the-outcast?utm_source=web&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share_myworks    
          
          Genre: original fiction, Time travel, apocalypse, adventure, space, YA

NarHollow

Sup mate, I hope you are doing great, I've checked your story and I have come to the conclusion that you can be a very good judge of a book, I need that really, I would appreciate your opinion about my newly published story, that will definitely help me see if I'll be able to continue or not.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/355235076?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=NarHollow&wp_originator=icdWeqZEFafA7LJDenCqGVNygroauPYN0ENox896p3nRLx0RioxtPv5HW%2FvjDD6MLqlSMo%2FVydlwZMtYU4nfCfrt7UllzLe9q0urqOZQpS0eLrvYX4sU1EtAmVKKpkMA

YagamiArashi-sama

That's all thank you for giving me a chance
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YagamiArashi-sama

It's nice...the premise is actually interesting and mystical-like..and the summary evokes the same hooking feeling but don't use capslock and learn to leave spaces in between so that your story looks clean and much better to read.
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YagamiArashi-sama

Lastly..please use " " for reference to what the character says and ' ' for their thoughts so that the readers won't be confused of the dialogue and the story
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nekomber

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