Yamitwo

Sorry to say this everyone, but Flat is being put on hiatus. I've lost motivation for the book and school is about to start. I don't know if I will ever finish Flat, but it was nice to take a shot at telling a story to you all. <3

Yamitwo

Sorry to say this everyone, but Flat is being put on hiatus. I've lost motivation for the book and school is about to start. I don't know if I will ever finish Flat, but it was nice to take a shot at telling a story to you all. <3

Yamitwo

UPDATE: Apologies again! I only just now got the chance to write Chapter 3 of Flat. I don't know when it will be out but it will be soon. Another quick thing, Chapters 3 and 4 will be filler chapters, and Chapter 5 will start to get more intresting! Apologies again for the long wait!

Yamitwo

Apologies on the dely on flat! I'm currently think of more ideas for the book and working on a new project. (Probably not the best to work on at the same time but whatever) I do have some good news. Flat will be posted before July 4 and I will TRY to post both chapters 3 and 4. Chapter 3 will absolutely be out before July 4. No promises for Chapter 4. That's my little update and I hope you enjoy the future chapters to come!

terabythya

Your writing style is a little clustered. It would be  better if you skip a line when starting a dialogue. Each dialogue should have a line/s for itself. For example:
          This silence is really getting to me. Come one brain think of a topic.
          
          " Do you like apples? I loove apples, they're my favourite snack", I said.
          
          " Apples are soo disgusting I don't know how people eat them.", he replied hatefully. 
          
          Wtf who doesn't like Apples? I should've just kept my damn mouth shut.
          
          Yeah just like that . Btw I'm not trying to hate or anything, I love your book. A world where the earth is flat nice concept. Just giving you a little tip. ☺

Yamitwo

@terabythya Thanks for the advice! I'll use it for future chapters!
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