Yanazuki

read my story?
          please?
          because im awesome?
          
          no?
          *hypnotises you*
          you're going to read my story.
          XD

did i told you 8 beats/syllables?
          sorry i forgot..
          it's seven..
          
          and i read it..
          try to count again..lol..
          all are seven..
          hmmmp..!

@Yanazuki anyways..
          thanks for your comment..
          
          but hey, try your poems to be readaBle too..
          most of them can't relate into it..
          
          GOOD LUCK
          
          XD

@oiram13 umm, i just re-read your poem and some lines have eight and some lines have seven syllables. 
          so i case you were wondering.
          i try and give honest criticism, the bit below everyone's poem says review and comments. i just think that people could be better writers if they became more aware of what they are writing.
          but hey im just a single opinion.

Ooh...
          
          if you try to count it, it got beats..
          8 beats/syllables..
          thanks fro reading anyway..!

Hey I was wondering if you could possibly read my story? It's called "Tantalizing Desires Past Midnight" 
          In know these can get pretty annoying but hey that's what we authors have to deal with right? Lol 
          Well hope you read it! Maybe comment, vote, and maybe maybe fan? Please and thank you! 
          
          Nightraven896 xoxo XD

hey thanks for becoming a fan!! it means a lot to me! you made my day! thanks from the bottom of my heart! plz feel free to tell what you think of my works!lol. 
          

Hi, I would like if you could read my story "The boy with 2 different eye colors" 
          I would love for you to read, comment, and even vote if you like it! 
          Thx if you do read it!!!! 
          Can not wait to see what you write if you read it!!!!!!!!!!! 

i am confused. have you read the poetry factor?