@Yancey2012 :) I have been editing the vampire's memory keeper on my home computer, and it is slowly changing the story, but it is probably 1000 times better now. Everything is way more intense, and so far nothing drags at all. You guys will love it when i am done. I will almost be like reading a new book, but most of the information will be the same. Just better presentation, and few character changes, and some new characters in there. :) :) :)