luveenha
Hi! I read your short story about Jake. My only thing I noticed was that you spelled Jake’s Korean name wrong lol. It’s Sim Jaeyun. Other than that, your writing is really good. I was impressed by how smooth the writing flow was and the detailed descriptions. The imagery was great as i pictured a lot of the scenes. The ending was very bittersweet and it was a good read. Great job overall! Just fix the little mistake lol
Yang_Jungwoon458
@ luveenha I will correct the mistakes immediately. Thank you very much for taking the time to read my book and appreciate it ! ♡
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