Yaoi_Godess

For "Neko and his Master," I'm not sure if I should keep the first person p.o.v, or switch to third person? The first person gives detail on what both characters are thinking, but the third person would allow me to be a little quicker updating. Also, is it weird to switch from one p.o.v to another, or is it fine since it's still the beginning of the story? What are your thoughts?

Sanscash

@Yaoi_Godess I dont mind,its up to you
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xxxkelseexxx

@Yaoi_Godess  I always like being in 3rd person because you get a better sense of the situation / story as a whole. You can always pop in a "Character name" felt there was something more to it the way "Character name"'s eyes glistened in the sun. Etc Etc.
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Yaoi_Godess

For "Neko and his Master," I'm not sure if I should keep the first person p.o.v, or switch to third person? The first person gives detail on what both characters are thinking, but the third person would allow me to be a little quicker updating. Also, is it weird to switch from one p.o.v to another, or is it fine since it's still the beginning of the story? What are your thoughts?

Sanscash

@Yaoi_Godess I dont mind,its up to you
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xxxkelseexxx

@Yaoi_Godess  I always like being in 3rd person because you get a better sense of the situation / story as a whole. You can always pop in a "Character name" felt there was something more to it the way "Character name"'s eyes glistened in the sun. Etc Etc.
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Yaoi_Godess

I apologize to everyone waiting for me to update my story, "Neko and His New Master" (honestly I need to rename that). I'm still trying to fix all of the chapters, spelling errors, ect. Please bare with me! I promise you won't be unsatisfied.