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Hey guys, I'm introducing my new book in which story is about a girl, her campanions and the persons she will meet. This story is about her life that how her life will change after her father's death and how she will overcome all the hardships. Let's read it to know more about her. Please read, give votes and reviews and tell me my mistakes so i can learn from it.  
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/281031655?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Batallun&wp_originator=bQA1I9zsNSs36c5lhoNupczJ74z2lFGAjhAK93ZOgiYggCTtSANJ65VA9ANiy0Wizartq3x3S%2FlfG%2FDdCbPnzwNmAJYyV1B5p2clKWT9XfP0JBUJmUIS%2FZynWQdtjm42