Sereneflow

Hey hi!! I am a new writer, writing my first story. Can you please read and comment on it so that helps me gain some review. Some people vote but no one comments. It would be a great help if you give me some insights.
          
          Aditya and Tanisha find themselves meeting again and again despite wanting nothing more than staying away from each other. Aditya is a special crime branch head chasing a crime while Tanisha is a school teacher  running away from a secret.
          Circumstances lead them to meet each other for a small time forming a truce only to get seperated again.
          But this time, Aditya decides to marry her. What made him take that decision? And how is she going to react to it? 
          What happened to the case he is solving?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390516339

holyypepperoni

Hi there!
          
          I came across your account in a comment section and thought I'd reach out. I’m a new writer, and I’d be incredibly grateful if you could check out my book, Bonds Beyond Business. 
          
          It's a Marriage of convenience story with a slight detour from usual conventional  stories in that genre. Every read, vote, and comment means the world to me as I continue to grow as a writer.
          
          If you have some time to spare, please give it a chance—I’d love to know your thoughts!
          
          Thank you so much!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/377405019-bonds-beyond-business

holyypepperoni

@Yashvi263 @Yashvi263 Hii, 
            Thank you for giving your time to the book. 
            Thank you for pointing it out, I have noted the error down. I'll make sure to correct it when I edit the book.  
            Please continue reading (if the book was up to your taste)
            Happy reading!!!
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Yashvi263

@holypepperoni_ so far i read till the altercation with her dad. So far great storyline, just a suggestion , i think instead of using his mother her father each time, u can use their names
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holyypepperoni

@Yashvi263 Thank you :)
            Looking forward to your views on the story <3
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raynaawrites

Hey I hope you are doing well. I will be really grateful if you give my book a chance. I just want you to read the first few chapters and then you can decide whether you want to continue or not. I'll be really really thankful for your little time..  https://www.wattpad.com/story/376132187?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=raynaawrites