ilalila

If stories about enemies who become lovers are your thing. If you love stories full of mystery, revenge and arranged marriages. This story is your story. A book wich is full of betrayal, love, enemies that become lovers and it is produced in Urfa. I invite you to read my book and give me your opinion on the coments about it. What you like and what you not, eveng if you want me to continue. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1581592287?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=ilalila

Lauries_toughts

Hello, I absolutely love your story. Please keep writing. I think you should keep the focus on the depth of Serhat and Yıldız’s story. Build their relationship deeper and focus less on the side characters, but don’t completely erase them. Overall, I think you should keep writing. 
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RemeAlanzi

I hope that you’re going to complete it it’s really good story i am excited to see the next chapter

RemeAlanzi

And i hope that will see serhat anger when he can’t really found and realize that she run away from him
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