kasaneru0101

Hello, I have a few questions about the comment you made about suggesting to a variant of Mayday in Spider in Hell, and maybe you want to add a couple things.
          
          (Just want to plan out things a head for future chapters.)
          
          1. Would Mephisto would be with Mayday since it is a soul deal, he would be in the distance or in her head by her just in case she ever betrays her despite being loyal? Or would it nullify due to being in another multiverse (not well verse in Mephisto character)
          
          2. Could Mephisto posses Mayday to take control in case Peter's help is getting through Mayday?

kasaneru0101

@Ybarra87 Well, that could work out. Since Imma treat him like Khonshu, and of course, pan out a couple chapters to help her. Especially when I plan for her to side with (Villian) as a partnership even though Mephisto and (Villian) despise each other. 
            
            Also just trying to get a bit of better image of your idea. Plus when Mayday arrives in the story, I'll credit you since you are the one that gave suggestion after all.
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Ybarra87

@kasaneru0101 Well, in my opinion, this variant will think all versions of her parents must be destroyed. She thinks all of them are selfish and care about themselves, willing to sacrifice her for their own desires. Her head is filled with lies told by Mephisto, and she refuses to believe otherwise unless she sees firsthand how far Peter is willing to go to save her. As for Mephisto possessing her, I could see that, but it would also make him interested in Hell that he doesn't rule. I know that with Mephisto, he has his own council of Mephistos. I had plans of making a crossover where he rules the outside of Hell and claims it's the real thing, sort of like a sideshow tourist trap that claims it's better than the real thing. I know Viziepop base Hell like a circus, so why not make Mephisto a two-bit hustler with a cheap imitation? Anyway, it's your story, write it the way you want it.
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