YellowMelow

Thanks everyone, for following my account :P I'll be sure to post some more chapters soon!

TSUZUROON

Congratulations! You reached 300 follows! Though I bet it won't be likely that you'll see this message. o~o
          Congrats anyway!

TSUZUROON

@YellowMelow You're welcome! May the number of follows continue to grow!
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YellowMelow

@Shestartsreading owo I didn't even realize until now! And Thank you :D
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YellowMelow

@StillSearchingForMe Thank you so much for that! I'm very self conscious about my writing (like many people) and I didn't think anyone would enjoy it that much. You really made my day! As for tips, I'm not sure what to say. Don't worry, though, you're not bothering me. Anyways, this is my first time giving tips to anyone so...my advice is to try and not leave sentences choppy, at least try and make things sound logical and just try to enjoy and play around with the story. You are the author after all. Hope I helped s bit and thanks again for the kind comment :D