KLD_Writes

Also, having all of the members fight with each other? If you were a real army, you wouldn't write this and show bts hating each other and being bad guys when they aren't. You wouldn't be spreading lies about them in this dumb fanfiction. 

KLD_Writes

What the heck is wrong with you? Us Armys know that Jungkook and Jimin are sweethearts, yet here you are, portraying them as bad guys. You shouldn't do that! You know you shouldn't do that! You shouldn't disrespect Jimin and Jungkook by making them look bad and by making them look like they'd actually do something like this! I don't care if it's a fanfiction. You shouldn't be giving out content like this if all you're going to do is portray them as cruel. And as rapists, too? No! You shouldn't do that at all! You need to edit the chapter or just delete the book all together because that's just not right at all.