A_JASON
thnx for the follow mate :)
A_JASON
hey thnx for taking out time to read my work. hope u liked it. plz feedback u can post in the comments . I'll b sure to take notice :)
A_JASON
n ya i would say if u liked what u read to gimme a follow. i will b updating my work regularly so tha way u'llb able to catch all the new work i post .
A_JASON
@A_JASON hmmm . thank u tons mate for reading what i have written. its really an honor. n i really appriciete all my readers n their advice . so dont feel shy to comment your thoughts :)
Yeokseokbam
@A_JASON It's fine. I really enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and yours was excellent. I really don't feel qualified to give advice, but if I had to, I'd say that a bit of the vocabulary might be a bit overwhelming. I understood a good chunk of it, but readers who don't know the words might be a bit confused.