@Moon_orchid_333 Your writing has a very gentle, cinematic charm that pulls the reader in from the beginning, especially with the polaroid scene and the emotional undertone of hidden feelings. The contrast between the messy energy of Wei Wuxian and the calm, almost untouchable presence of Lan Wangji is portrayed beautifully and feels natural rather than forced. Descriptions are vivid, though trimming a few repeated adjectives would make the impact even stronger and more elegant. Adding a small sensory detail or one quick internal thought during their first meeting could deepen the emotional connection further. The pacing flows smoothly, and the young crush atmosphere feels innocent and believable. Overall, it’s engaging, visually pretty, and already has the emotional foundation of a story readers would want to continue.