@Yo_on7e
Hi.
I hope you're accepting reading requests. I've started a new story "an anatomy of a wounded soul". It is a thrill/mystery teen fiction.
https://my.w.tt/MosMBd8jW5
I hope you take a chance to read the story.
Please do and leave feedbacks.
Thank you.
Aditi.
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Hey, thank you for reading The Great Pretender and giving it votes! I hope you enjoyed it ✨
Hey would you mind reading and reviewing my story its only 1 chapter it's called forever in doubt
@goldyas123 Hey ! I'm not sure if I'm qualified, but thanks for giving that honor. As I read your story, I noticed some missing stuffs and fews typos, but in general your story line is interesting. Your way of describing is also tip top, making both characters mysterious and so. You just have to organize your chapter a bit by using more sentence connectors and punctuations. Try to section it in paragraphs too, so that the chapter looks longer. Anyway, keep going on. After few pages, you'll incorporate it automatically . Good luck for the following