YooMin_72

Hi, I was wondering if you wanted to read a Sowoo story I have out. I would like feedback and what I could change. I only have one chapter at the time being.

YAH GAH HAH YAH
          Freakin doodle doodles. Alright, update on the old friend I was trying to say hello to. Well, I didn’t say hi to her but, while I was dropping off my friends to their class i spent a tad bit more time saying bye and once I walked out the door and turned the corner I almost bumped into her. I don’t know why I was looking down AND I PROMISE I DIDN’T PLAN THIS, she just happened to turn the corner at the same time as me. It’s destiny guys 
          Anyways, as I turned the corner, I lift my head and see her. I won today. It surprised me so I might’ve had a shocked expression. We looked at each other AND SHE SMILED GUYSSSS. There wasn’t enough time to say hi since my class was on the other side of campus and the bell had already ringed. Maybe next time 

Deuteronomio pls update

I’ve lost interest in the current 5 fics I was reading. HELLPPO
          I can’t find any good ones anymore. The ones I liked are unfinished. 
          Mi Gran Error, troublemakers, touch of nature, and I know there’s more but I can’t remember the names. More than friends updated but it was just one chapter and this was like 2 months ago or so…
          Don’t get me wrong, I was grateful, but I’ve been so starved these past MONTHS that I need another update. FROM ANYONE PLEASE 
          I hate when I start a good fic but (I was gonna say bored but it’s not a good fic if I get bored) then I’m unable to read it so I get unfamiliar with it and now I feel like I have to start over from the start to get what the fic is about and where I’m at so I just drop it and never read it again. sigh 
          Pls update 

School hasn’t given me time to read my AO3 or WATTPAD fics

Not matter how many chances I get, I can’t take it. OH MY FREAKIN GOSH, I can’t with myself. I’ve been trying to talk to an old friend these past few weeks but every opportunity I get goes to waste. I am my worst enemy. T_T 
          Today was the closest I’ve gotten to greet them and I blew it. I got nervous and turned away. Also, in the morning, I planned to “accidentally” bump into them yet I still couldn’t build up enough courage to turn my head and say “Hi.”
          The next steps I took were full of regret. It felt like something hit me or stabbed me on the heart then continued to spread throughout my entire body. 
          LAST YEAR I TALKED (argued with) TO HER LIKE WE WERE ENEMIES BUT NOW I CAN’T EVEN GATHER A FEW WORDS TO STRIKE UP A CONVERSATION. OR EVEN WORSE, I CAN’T EVEN LOOK AT HER. 
          I’m doomed. 
          

Mi Gran Error UPDATEEE PLSSS. The plot was actually good. Wdym Yoohyeon killed her abusive boyfriend, panicked, called Minji and instead of letting her turn herself in Minji decides to runaway with her. And they dyed their hair to disguise themselves. And they were broke so they decided to go into random bars and steal intoxicated people’s wallets which resulted into them getting caught by a girl in the girl band that was performing there. They didn’t only get caught stealing by the girl but she also recognized them from the “wanted posters” and idk if she threatened to turn them in but she eventually realized their situation and lowkey helped them. 
          Oh, and all they had was Minji’s? Or Yoohyeon’s motorcycle for transportation. I don’t remember whose bike it was. 
          The end, there was no end since the author didn’t finish it. I remember Yoohyeon made JiU make her a promise. Something about if she gets caught then Minji can’t let herself be involved with her. Or like she might’ve told Minji that she was gonna turn herself in. And we all know JiU is gonna break that promise. Les be realllll 
          Hell the hell r u gonna let your hg(lover, situationship) go to jail. Likeeee bffr 
          I think they tried to have a romantic relationship in the past but it didn’t work out. Because of Yoohyeon idk what she did. Author mentioned Alldaylong story #peak 
          Last thing I forgot to mention was that all the dreamies were in a band but I think Yoohyeon parted ways since her toxic as boyfriend forced her to. And since JiU is running away with her she can’t attend the practices so technically they’re both out. 
          My last thought after somewhat summarizing this is that I think JiYoo is going to die by either getting shot by the police or end up dead somewhere in a alleyway. Someone’s going to die, I can feel it.

You know how as a kid you already have a plan on what you want to be when you grow up? At least most of us did. Well, I had a goal in mind but now I’m not so sure. Idk what I want to be 

I switched from WATTPAD to AO3 a while ago since there was so much people saying it was better and it probably would be if there were 
          more JiYoo fics. lol  
          There was about 200 JiYoo fics but almost all of them were one-shots and I like to read a fic with more than 16-17 chapters. 
          Therefore, I decided to come back here and search for more, even though there are more than 50 fics I haven’t even started or finished. 

What a birthday