YoonHyeRie

I like the concept of your story but please not so many cuss words use them only when needed or if you have a desperate situation and why do you capitalize every word it makes it super hard to read and really confusing plus you should slow the story down its getting hard to understand but I get the general idea 

Thank you for the follow. As far as continuing your story, if you enjoy writing it, you should continue. In my guide book I state that first books are generally going to be not very good. It takes time and practice to gain the skills. But every book written serves a purpose. 
          
          I do, however, point out that I cannot read any books currently. In general, I avoid reading ongoing stories because too many authors quit the story because it didn't get enough attention or they didn't have the time. I think I only had three or four readers while I was writing my book.
          
          I can tell you that if you feel unsure about your writing, it is evident on the page.