YoongisChiminie

Hello, I know I haven't been very active lately, like I said before I was moving back home and then getting the house ready for Christmas and going Christmas shopping and also helping out because we have a family business here at the house. But now a few days ago we were told that my grandmother (who lives in our home country) had a more severe stroke then those she had in the past and was left unable to speak or eat or even move her body. 
          	It was very stressful and we were considering sending my mother home to be with her which would be hard on us given the nature of our business and the holiday season but in the end we're still discussing and my family needs me to be more involved now so I don't have much time.
          	 I'm still trying to update as best as I can but my mind isn't in a happy place right now. 
          	
          	 I truly hope you won't give up on my stories because of that and I hope I'll update soon. Sorry for the long text

YoongisChiminie

@YoongisChiminie thank you all  my grandmother's actually getting better, I'm glad I had your support and I hope to update soon
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VIolet_Millain

@ YoongisChiminie be strong, I believe in you!
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-Yumyumi-

@YoongisChiminie I hope she gets better soon!! Take care and happy holidays
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YoongisChiminie

Hello, I know I haven't been very active lately, like I said before I was moving back home and then getting the house ready for Christmas and going Christmas shopping and also helping out because we have a family business here at the house. But now a few days ago we were told that my grandmother (who lives in our home country) had a more severe stroke then those she had in the past and was left unable to speak or eat or even move her body. 
          It was very stressful and we were considering sending my mother home to be with her which would be hard on us given the nature of our business and the holiday season but in the end we're still discussing and my family needs me to be more involved now so I don't have much time.
           I'm still trying to update as best as I can but my mind isn't in a happy place right now. 
          
           I truly hope you won't give up on my stories because of that and I hope I'll update soon. Sorry for the long text

YoongisChiminie

@YoongisChiminie thank you all  my grandmother's actually getting better, I'm glad I had your support and I hope to update soon
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VIolet_Millain

@ YoongisChiminie be strong, I believe in you!
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-Yumyumi-

@YoongisChiminie I hope she gets better soon!! Take care and happy holidays
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-Yumyumi-

How're you author!!

YoongisChiminie

Sorry for not answering, I didn't see! You can call me Daria ^^
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-Yumyumi-

@YoongisChiminie Just read it also can I ask what I should call you author?
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YoongisChiminie

@-Yumyumi-  This is so sweet T-T 
            I hope you have fun at school!
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elysiandavis

T_T author nim! Your username is being my fav rn and ofc the way you wrote slays I really admire your writing <33

elysiandavis

<33
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YoongisChiminie

@damnneona Aww thank you! <3
            And I can see that, you've saved many of my stories, I appreciate the support always <33
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artfa04

Hey, author-nim please give my oneshot a try. And I apologise for posting this on your message board. Let me know if you'd want me to delete it. Thank you so much 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376053951?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=artfa04

artfa04

@artfa04 
            Thank you for the feedback. It means a lot to me. It was my first time writing a Oneshot so it might be not my best right now. I'll work hard and will improve.
            
            Thanks again author. ♡
            Have a good day.
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YoongisChiminie

@artfa04 Hello! I've read your chapter and since Wattpad deleted the private messages I'll just say what I have to say here. First of all omega/alpha and mpreg aren't my style so I may be the wrong person to ask. You did well setting the surroundings and the characters, I enjoyed the overall vibe of it all. Some of the words were hard to understand which did pull me out of it from time to time (just like you, I'm not native english speaker but clearly you have better vocabulary). The pacing was good for a oneshot as well. Like you said there were grammatical errors and sometime the phrases were hard to understand because of it. But overall it's really good. If it was the starting chapter to a whole story, I would advise planting the story better but yeah, that's about it for me. Good work and thank you for asking me! <3
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