YoongisChiminie

Hello, everyone ! I'm sorry if I haven't updated but I'll try to as soon as I can. I'm in the middle of moving so I haven't had time. Thank you <3

-Yumyumi-

How're you author!!

YoongisChiminie

Sorry for not answering, I didn't see! You can call me Daria ^^
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-Yumyumi-

@YoongisChiminie Just read it also can I ask what I should call you author?
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YoongisChiminie

@-Yumyumi-  This is so sweet T-T 
            I hope you have fun at school!
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elysiandavis

T_T author nim! Your username is being my fav rn and ofc the way you wrote slays I really admire your writing <33

YoongisChiminie

@damnneona Aww thank you! <3
            And I can see that, you've saved many of my stories, I appreciate the support always <33
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artfa04

Hey, author-nim please give my oneshot a try. And I apologise for posting this on your message board. Let me know if you'd want me to delete it. Thank you so much 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376053951?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=artfa04

artfa04

@artfa04 
            Thank you for the feedback. It means a lot to me. It was my first time writing a Oneshot so it might be not my best right now. I'll work hard and will improve.
            
            Thanks again author. ♡
            Have a good day.
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YoongisChiminie

@artfa04 Hello! I've read your chapter and since Wattpad deleted the private messages I'll just say what I have to say here. First of all omega/alpha and mpreg aren't my style so I may be the wrong person to ask. You did well setting the surroundings and the characters, I enjoyed the overall vibe of it all. Some of the words were hard to understand which did pull me out of it from time to time (just like you, I'm not native english speaker but clearly you have better vocabulary). The pacing was good for a oneshot as well. Like you said there were grammatical errors and sometime the phrases were hard to understand because of it. But overall it's really good. If it was the starting chapter to a whole story, I would advise planting the story better but yeah, that's about it for me. Good work and thank you for asking me! <3
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-Yumyumi-

Hiii I just wanna thank you cause you're one of my inspiration as a writer. I admire you alot!

YoongisChiminie

@Amayo_tsuki Oh, thank you so much! I see you have a story of your own, hope it does well and you enjoy writing it as much as I do. Wish you all the best!
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