@artfa04 Hello! I've read your chapter and since Wattpad deleted the private messages I'll just say what I have to say here. First of all omega/alpha and mpreg aren't my style so I may be the wrong person to ask. You did well setting the surroundings and the characters, I enjoyed the overall vibe of it all. Some of the words were hard to understand which did pull me out of it from time to time (just like you, I'm not native english speaker but clearly you have better vocabulary). The pacing was good for a oneshot as well. Like you said there were grammatical errors and sometime the phrases were hard to understand because of it. But overall it's really good. If it was the starting chapter to a whole story, I would advise planting the story better but yeah, that's about it for me. Good work and thank you for asking me! <3