will you pleasee give a chance to it , though I have not posted much but its just i want some opinion on it and some suggestion as it my first time . i also read your story and they are too good , literally too good .. and i am looking forward for more updates from you ... my story; https://www.wattpad.com/story/410094611-teri-talab-a-strong-desire-%F0%9F%94%A5