YouAreDeadInside101

i will not be writing for a while. how long? i don't know . . .

OliviaMargaretteSant

@YouAreDeadInside101 pls continue the story we're traveler died plsss I rlly loved it Ty ty
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YouAreDeadInside101

i will not be writing for a while. how long? i don't know . . .

OliviaMargaretteSant

@YouAreDeadInside101 pls continue the story we're traveler died plsss I rlly loved it Ty ty
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Chantokyo85

Hi Dead can you pls read my first book called ON HOLD Natsumi Matsuoka Story pls vote for it and tell me what you think about it and don't forget to read it too and share my stories to your following readers and tell them what they think about it

YouAreDeadInside101

@Chantokyo85  maybe you should not make your chapters very straightforward. Instead of the typical "I gotta go" maybe you could say that He/She saw their parents, signalling that they have to go home or somewhere.  Or you could proofread.  I see lots of grammatical errors that could be easily corrected. Like, try not to capitalize words like "Blue". You simply could make your fanfiction popular, you just need the right ideas, which have been thought out through. Like I said, there are lots of errors, so you could take some time and proofread. That is my feedback for you, and I hope you have a nice rest of your day.
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YouAreDeadInside101

@Chantokyo85  I can try too. I've never been asked to do this before. So, I thank you for this message. I know it takes lots of courage to do this, and I'm not going to let you down.
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YouAreDeadInside101

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You ever have the feeling that karma is creating something big? Karma really likes making me and @kill_me1 suffer at home. Like, I broke the computer I am currently using to write on a damn mattress. My parents don't know I am on Wattpad, but I think my mom is also on Wattpad. So, I severely hope that karma isn't going to be a bitch during school this year.