YoungAuthors123

Requirements and Updates:
          	-Previous mayor's name and/or last name.
          	-Donovan Ryder as Vedic City's current major?
          	-NEED main male character's name!
          	-NEED female character's name!
          	-Starts as 'childhood experiences' leading up to the two characters to meet each other. Very quickly escalates to trying to live and survive a whole new side of the world.
          	-Storyline Series (if made into one): Childhood to teens/young adults to early/middle aged adults. Haven't decided what adult age they will be.
          	
          	-Male Character not needed or important right now.

YoungAuthors123

Requirements and Updates:
          -Previous mayor's name and/or last name.
          -Donovan Ryder as Vedic City's current major?
          -NEED main male character's name!
          -NEED female character's name!
          -Starts as 'childhood experiences' leading up to the two characters to meet each other. Very quickly escalates to trying to live and survive a whole new side of the world.
          -Storyline Series (if made into one): Childhood to teens/young adults to early/middle aged adults. Haven't decided what adult age they will be.
          
          -Male Character not needed or important right now.

YoungAuthors123

I thought that the mark that the cityfolk had, was a way to kick off a new age already? And wouldn't the leader have some restricted access on some parts of the city so that people won't know what they're doing to other people behind the scenes?

odd562

True I thought new era as I wrote that guess I for got and wouldn't restriction result in people being suspicious?
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YoungAuthors123

Hey I think I have an idea how to start it off, somewhat. Not too big on the specific details though. She helps out her 'new' family and wants to go outside the town to play. But however, when she does this, she quickly gets lost and can't find her way back home. I chose this idea becuz it would give her a sense of somewhat of a normal childhood experience, venturing out and exploring their surroundings.
          
          What's ur idea? And could u tell me why u chose that idea, because ii would give me ur perceptive on the beginning of the game.

YoungAuthors123

well, let's focus on the main male character's personality. Maybe he throughout the series he starts to realize what it means to carry a mark. And fears that he will become one of the city people, who are taught to think that the townspeople are tainted or need to be taught a lesson. Fearing that he will become of the those 'monsters'. 
          
          His playful and childish love during his childhood, develops into a romantic and mature kind of love for Amelia. He is can get a little too overprotective and can act a little iffy around a different kind of person. To new people that he and Amelia encounter, he will be a little hesitant and reserved, but once he is warms up to them, he is can show his true personality. 
          
          To basically sum it up, he is like a cat around new people and a dog when it comes to Amelia or good people like the townspeople.

odd562

I like it
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YoungAuthors123

Maybe as he realizes that the mark holds something, he feels saddened and pained that he was in love with Amelia, but had to hide the fact that he was marked, fearing that she would react the same way the people in towns long ago did.
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YoungAuthors123

well I think when he feels the sense of safety from Amelia, he begins to want to stay with her and be there for her. And in the end he shares a child-like love for her.
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YoungAuthors123

I wuz thinkin that if we start a game franchise (3), maybe they should start out as early teens. 
          
          2nd one, if they get separated, the male careactor's mark is added a little sumthin extra to it *don't know what it is through*. 
          And we see the other side of Amelia that not even the male knows about. The one that is the hopeless, remorseful, and self-guilt one. Just like the ones in the towns. Taking responsibility for everything: the change in the male behavior * if it is* and everything that has been going on.

odd562

well i don't think they will put any forced intimacy
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YoungAuthors123

I know this maybe irrelevant, but I have some stuff that needs to get clear to the gaming company. No forced intimacy, I think it's sickening.
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YoungAuthors123

Yeah maybe put the connection to the city and the other stuff like this.
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YoungAuthors123

idk I think when she doesn't see them anymore, they were roughened up a little bit and then marked. The mark represents that they are now property of Vedic City and its territories. But what should be so special about having this mark besides this? Do u think that they have special treatments? Or did the mark have its own purpose? What do u think?

odd562

i think the make should separate the rich from the poor and i actually would like to see her parents again even if its just for a memory
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YoungAuthors123

well not beaten to death, but maybe nocked out and then dragged into the city and how are her parents supposed to even be on the other side of the city. They're still in their hometown.
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odd562

maybe like ownership to the city or like maybe its an id tracker or maybe it show who was born in the city after it was taken over
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YoungAuthors123

how old do u want Amelia to be? Because I  wyz thinkin tat she shud be in her early 20's

YoungAuthors123

Ok, we need to think about wat happens that makes the whole conflict begin. Maybe the community noticed the slight increase in taxes and wondered where the money was going. The city ppl said it was for a good cause, but there wasn't anything that they heard of the 'good cause'. People started to get curious and then they don't any of the details of the 'cause' and get tensed. People stopped paying the increasing taxes and that's when the city ppl came in. Teaching them a lesson. Finding out that the money was going to the city and didn't come back to the people.
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YoungAuthors123

I thik he shud be in his very late teens and Amelia shud be in her very early 20's.
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YoungAuthors123

well at least try. and 2nd I tink it shud be mostly about her trying to survive and help others survive in a plac that doesn't want them to belong. That's wat I relly trying to say here, wats shocking is that this one doesn't might not have to have her take bac the city. It's mostly about her life and having a deep sense of protecting people from those who would try to harm the people she cares about.
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