YoungWriter_x

So basically just want to announce some changes to Black Falcons (book 1). I'll be making Aivra black, mainly because being a young black girl it's more relatable to me, as well as the fact that in media and fiction black girls are never really portrayed as insecure and sensitive, or dependant on others despite their ability to be like this just as others are. Therefore I'll be re-writing some stuff to get some stereotypes straight, before I continue to write book 2. New/re-written/edited chapters in terms of content or different details to the book will be labelled 'new chapter (number)' so that you know. However because this isn't a drastic change, not much will be different about the book apart from the colour of Aivra's skin really and the effect this may have on her as a person or the way others treat her. 

YoungWriter_x

So basically just want to announce some changes to Black Falcons (book 1). I'll be making Aivra black, mainly because being a young black girl it's more relatable to me, as well as the fact that in media and fiction black girls are never really portrayed as insecure and sensitive, or dependant on others despite their ability to be like this just as others are. Therefore I'll be re-writing some stuff to get some stereotypes straight, before I continue to write book 2. New/re-written/edited chapters in terms of content or different details to the book will be labelled 'new chapter (number)' so that you know. However because this isn't a drastic change, not much will be different about the book apart from the colour of Aivra's skin really and the effect this may have on her as a person or the way others treat her. 

YoungWriter_x

@livym13 It's really really good! I like the plot and I've started reading it. The only thing is a few punctuation and spelling mistakes, but i'm no professional. Can u read some of my book and tell me what you think? Thanks!! :D 

o_matthews

@YoungWriter_x I'll definitely read yours! Thanks for your input guys!
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