Michelle

Hey it's themazerunnerr_fanpage!! 

hey,
          im just wondering if u would ever bother to read my story?
          its called: Is It Love? Or... Was It Never Meant To Be?
          
          if you read mine and comment, vote or become a fan... i would totally return the favour. (if u just tell me...)
          
          thanks so much .
          hugs a millions! (:
          luv303 <3 <3 <3

Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes!!!  100 reads on my first chapter!!!  Thank you peoples!!!
          
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hey if you like stuff about the ocean then you would probably likie my newest story :) If you could check it out and comment I would really appreciate it ...
          Thanks :)

hi there, i was just wondering if you could drop by at my profile page and check out my story entitled
          
          SCARLET MIDNIGHT...
          
          its my first try on writing a story and hope you could comment or critic on it or maybe just vote. lol
          
          if you're not fond of stories, i also have a collection of poems to read. thanks
          
          moongazer

@screaminginmyhead: 
          Thanks so much!  That's about the same as what my uncle said.
          I'll be posting chapter two very soon... maybe tomorrow.  Have to get it ready(!)
          
              Michelle

Hi,
          
          LOVED your story! It's really awesome. I see your new on wattpad so WELCOME! That's great that your really serious with your writing. I really like your use of words. I love how you described things. It wasn't very clear, what was happening in the story, but it was good nonetheless. I like how you wrote the mother's speech. Well not really speech but how she talked. Very nice indeed. I liked the first page the best, it was really good. I was captivated by it. Umm . . . well done. Really great grammar. Try and be more descriptive of the background and people so it jogs the readers imagination a little. That's about it! 
          
          xxx J