@YourFriendSteven
finally finished notes on the Ares fight...
Tomorrow I'll start the resolution of the fight, where the Furies come in and the rest of the chapter...
Have a good rest of the day, my friends :D
'But he's not ready...'
'Is he not ready? Or are you not ready?'
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Just some teaser test dialogue :) between two people....
NOTES ARE AT 3300 WORDS
@YourFriendSteven okay I think I know which of the two are, first one is OBVIOUSLY Athena, now I am 50% certain it could be three different people for the second person: hera( I wouldn't be surprised if she wants Athena to get married), Aphrodite ( she is the goddess of love nuff said) and last but not least Hermes ( is probably trying to get her to finally confess her feelings). Also when you have y/n and Athena meet each other again IN PERSON, will you be doing their version of " would you fall in love with me again" song?
tempted to buy a Xiphos, just to say I have one....
@Kamen_Sol good idea, good idea, counter argument: I already have the Blades of Chaos to the left of my bed and the Leviathan axe right next to it (death fears ME)
Alright, who was gonna tell me Destiny 2 is ending live service updates June 9th…
oh.....you are not ready for this....
heheheheheh, YOU SHOULD TAKE MY ACCESS FROM GOOGLE DOCS AWAY
MY NOTES MAKE FUTURE STEVEN VERY EAGER TO WRITE SOME OF THIS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
First half of the Ares fight is confirmed to be roughed out, [REDACTED] is currently being taken notes on....
The FIRST HALF of the fight against ares is roughed out(key word being rough), I’ll try to keep working at it, but my work schedule is about to be straight hell for the next two weeks
Im sorry if there is no progress in the notes going forward for a minute but i will do my best:D
Hey, you know that video you shared, here my retaliation.
https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZTkEedT45/
Man, it really is hard to find reference videos for a Spear Vs Long Sword fight...
The fight scene between Ares and Y/n needs to be decent at the bare minimum, so I'm kinda stressing about it, and boy, have I been neglecting writing because of it.
But hey, hopefully it'll all work out in the end
@YourFriendSteven found some reference videos you might like my friend! https://youtu.be/ENsZ55CAsME?si=AKHVJGQFF2_qDI5c https://youtu.be/5ypFx_CZVfA?si=Z0jg6X3ARFeh-hyd https://youtu.be/IIQvrA66_Hs?si=tv2xFY8_vSbG8rUr https://youtube.com/shorts/Hn9dFWdMzwc?si=j_m0MxHEIrJASHcX
I saw this…so now you have to aswell…
https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZP8pBsPf6/
I just started taking general notes on the fight between Y/n and Ares.
I'm looking back on certain chapters, seeing what things I can do that show character development, and one thing I just noticed is really funny.
In the chapter right before 'Dinner Drama', the chapter where Y/n and Athena had a picnic in the forest, and they did a practice fight.
Y/n was the first one to move, showing that he was younger, stupid, and didn't understand what he just did in the general feel of the battle.
In the fight on the beach, Ares is the first one to move in the stand off.
I feel like having Ares being the first one to move to attack is kinda poetic, seeing as he's the God of war, he believes he can win.
BUT! Athena is the Master of war, and Y/n learns from the best (and his mistakes....most of the time ....)
This was just a cool parallel I wanted to bring up, and I wasn't sure if anybody would remember that chapter so long ago lol