Mags134340
Hi there
Gosh, thank you for taking the time to read my fanfic
I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing it and hope to see you in the notifications again soon
Mags134340
@Mags134340 Ty once again ✨ whenever I see a new reader, vote or comment it's one of the things that motivates me to write more. I am planning to rewrite some chapters and have already republished Chapter 1 so the flow of the story would be better. Thank you again for reading it ✨✨
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YourManJ0E
@Mags134340 In my brain, I like how it shoots the reader straight into the book, and after reading it you can tell its from the battle trial(first hero class). In my brain the story got processed weirdly. But after reading a few chapters after it got better. Honestly nothing wrong with the story. It's more of my brain being weird to reading how it's done. Keep up the good work though! Enjoying it alot
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Mags134340
@YourManJ0E ty✨ Also can I ask what was confusing? I want to improve my writing and storytelling so your input would help a lot
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