YourPsychodreams

The new update on the dark romance of Leila and Makros is up don't forget to vote and comment ur thoughts about this chapter, thanks 
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ChrysDan

Please don’t make their beefing/distance/hatred last almost the ending part of the novel . I liked “the control” a lot, just those features made it kinda tiring to continue. Trust me you are doing well.
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Socialia

If enemies-to-lovers stories are your guilty pleasure, this book will be your next obsession! Meet a morally grey man whose dark allure and complex persona make your pulse race. Their sizzling chemistry isn't confined to the boardroom—it teeters on the edge of desire and danger. Will their fiery connection survive the trials of the corporate world and beyond? Dive into a romance that will captivate and leave you breathless.
          
          
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Nandini1978

I read His Control.  You need to edit it. There are some contradictory history about Balia's parents and past. Also who was the main villain of the story Pappeteer  or Diablo. Are they two different persons or a same one. Was Rocco or Elio involved with Diablo weren't clear. I think you should take your time to read and clear the confusions through editing. Otherwise it's a nice story.

YourPsychodreams

The new update on the dark romance of Leila and Makros is up don't forget to vote and comment ur thoughts about this chapter, thanks 
          https://www.wattpad.com/1444020000?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=YourPsychodreams

ChrysDan

Please don’t make their beefing/distance/hatred last almost the ending part of the novel . I liked “the control” a lot, just those features made it kinda tiring to continue. Trust me you are doing well.
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