YourService14

Hello everyone! Hope you all have a good day. For anyone who comes across this page in hopes of finding a good book to read, this is for you. "The Asset" series by KatNoir206 is a really great series. Full of action, a rollercoaster of emotions and amazing badass characters. Hope you guys will enjoy it. Have a nice day :)

its_Sesi

Hi! 
          
          My apologies for approaching you directly. Avid readers like you are a boon to writers like me. 
          
          If you get a chance, can please check my new Spy thriller story. "Spies n Spice". 
          
          It's about a Secret Service agent Victor, his missions and how he embarks on the biggest challenge of his life, when his mentor in RAW (Indian Intelligence Service similar to CIA) is murdered. 
          
          Here's the link.
          https://my.w.tt/wjSMiG08DY
          
          I have written romance and other action thriller stories too. 
          
          If you get a chance, please check them. 
          If you don't accept reading request like this, please ignore this message.
          Cheers
          
          Sesi

YourService14

Hello everyone! Hope you all have a good day. For anyone who comes across this page in hopes of finding a good book to read, this is for you. "The Asset" series by KatNoir206 is a really great series. Full of action, a rollercoaster of emotions and amazing badass characters. Hope you guys will enjoy it. Have a nice day :)

DELynch43

Thank you for adding all three of my boys to your reading list @YourService14 I appreciate it ❣️

YourService14

@DELynch43 You don't have to thank me.  I like your book synopsis and chose them to read for later. I'm sure I will love them once I finish reading the current ones I'm occupied with and I'm betting they will be great. You are super sweet :) I hope I see you around the time I'm reading your book. Take care! ❤
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agatharoza

I have no idea how on earth did you find me but YOU ARE AWESOME!!! Thank you so much for reading and voting Entwined ♡ I hope you’ll have amazing day cos you just made mine!!  It’s my baby and I really appreciate your support cos I know how it feels like to have none ♡     
          
          P.s. The second book Enamoured and spinoff Engulfed are available on Wattpad! ♡

agatharoza

@YourService14 aww you don't have to thank me, love ❤️ I should be the one to thank you for giving my book a chance and for taking some of your time to reply this ❤️ your support means the world to me and I won't take it for granted ❤️ just know that you're one of the reasons I keep on writing get ❤️ stay blessed ❤️ agatha x
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YourService14

@agatharoza Wattpad Recommendation is how I found your book and then you. Thank YOU for writing such a unique book. I hope you get recognition for your work from everyone! 
            
            PS: I'll make sure to read them as soon as you've completed them :) 
            
            Have a nice day!
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YourService14

@JEHallows Thank YOU for a great book. Your insight on what probably goes through every writer's mind while writing was very unique. I really enjoyed the book and wish it was never ending :) Also I'd like to mention that the title now suits the book better. 
          
          I hope you write more inspiring books such as this one. Have a nice day

SoulfullySufficed

Hey!
          I'd love it if you could give  my collection of poems called "Wanderlust" a try. It would be awesome to hear your opinion on it; constructive criticism is appreciated with open arms :) 
          
          If you don't like this book posted on your walls, by all means delete this post.  Happy reading!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/116613631-wanderlust

YourService14

@SoulfullySufficed 
            
            You are most welcome :) I get the gist of it. Also it was a great idea to capture what goes through a mind of a kid in that situation. I'd also like to think, even if the child is 7 years old, with what she had witnessed in those 7 years makes her a bit mature than those normally her age. Including her siblings. She seems to view the reality of the world along with the imagination of a kid. So I think it would work writing it in a mature fashion even fot a 7 year old :)
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SoulfullySufficed

Thanks a lot for the ideas you've popped at me.  I'll definitely take them into account. You're right, the poem should be shorter but I was trying to use the language of a 7 year old so I got carried away, I guess. I enjoyed hearing your take on my work. Have a nice day! :D
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YourService14

@SoulfullySufficed Hello! Thanks for posting and asking for opinion on your book. If I'm being honest, poetry doesn't hold my attention for long. I get bored easily :-/ Unless it is funny..lol
            
             I'll try to read all the ones you have completed over time. As of now I read 4 and I think I'm done for the day.
            
            But they are pretty amazing. I liked Suspended and Warring Sides. Especially Warring sides. It was perfect. I also understood why you named the title which I usually don't I'm usually lost with all the meanings behind poems. But you are doing a great job so far. I think anyone who can write poems is talented :) It's an art to turn words into emotions or thoughts  ...keep it up :) 
            
            For your poem on the 7 year old who works in a factory that produces fireworks is interesting. Although I think you can make it shorter  .. Idk how to explain it, but instead of explaining how many sibblings the kid had and all it could all have been summed up in one sentence with something like... "5 pairs of eyes danced with excitement." Or something like that so we know the kid has 5 other siblings that she wants to share her stolen treasure with...you know.. Make your explanations shorter I think? With limited words. 
            
            Cz to me poems are verses that explain a lot in very little wording. Cz that's the beauty of it I think :) Hope you understood what I was trying to say :) 
            
            Good Luck and I wish you all the best.
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