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Hey! Thanks for the follow! I love your reading lists ❤️

@SandrinaVenturo happy to be of help!

@SandrinaVenturo I have been reading "What a life I have!" It's great imo and haven't yet encountered any errors. I really like "A Depressed Heart." If there's any advice I could give to help you, it would be to incorporate more imagery. Imagery really helps to get readers in the feels! Sorry, I'm like really bad at giving advice xD

@SandrinaVenturo I would love to offer feedback but unfortunately that's literally my worst ability :')) Your writing style is great though! I think it's just that everyone's style is different so it would be hard to not change the entire style if someone tries to "fix" it.