Your_Hiro_016

A new chapter of "The First Human Fallen" is coming veryyy soon 
          	
          	I know it's been very long, maybe too long- definitely too long since I've released a chapter for anything, but I'm definitely getting more invested. Destiny 2 is crawling back into my heart 
          	
          	I just wish I had some others to do the raids and high level stuff with 
          	
          	Expect more frequent updates, and a few new books I've been writing for fun as I got interested in the topic. 

Hans_Potterman

@Your_Hiro_016  I would gladly join once i get online again
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ktosikktosi

@ Your_Hiro_016  yay!
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itachithesavage175

@Your_Hiro_016 cool dude it has been long but glad your ok you know how it is poeple usually think a author is dead or something when they dont update there story and what console do you have maybe we can play destiny 2 together all tho I dont my mic right now
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defmancool

Are you having trouble writing (either due to real life stuff or lack of inspiration)

defmancool

0-0 they actually party every other day in university 
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Your_Hiro_016

@defmancool  Yeah, I'm also at Uni now and party every second day
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Dragondoor

Title:legend of the animal shifters
          
          (Abused/disowned/homeless/depressed op male reader x
          overprotective/loving/caring taimanin asagi harem)
          
          Power & abilities:
          Alpha physiology 
          Transcendent animal physiology(all animal-based abilities)
          Elemental animal physiology(all Elemental manipulations)
          Superior animal physiology(all superpowers)
          Spiritual animal physiology(all Spiritual powers)
          Shapeshifting(forms of animals)
          ShapeShifting combat 
          Ninjutsu intuition 
          Ninja magic 
          Supernatural stealth 
          Stealth combat 
          Wall running 
          Cross-wall jumping 
          Water walking 
          Shuriken proficiency 
          Smoke bomb proficiency 
          Mystical martial arts 
          Gesture casting 
          Child prodigy 
          Talent embodiment 
          Supernatural cooking 
          culinary intuition 
          Multi-strike 
          Multi-hit strike 
          Power Megaton 
          Full counter 
          Absolute weapon proficiency 
          Weaponized body
          Weaponized tail
          weaponized tongue
          Supernatural roar
          Supernatural investigation
          Absolute intelligence
          Supernatural body
          Supernatural combat
          Absolute evasion
          Supernatural strength
          Absolute speed
          Absolute health
          Supernatural unarmed combat 
          Meta luck
          Super eating
          Superior activity
          Disguise mastery
          Omni-Elemental manipulation
          Sex specialist 
          Sex empowerment 
          Seduction intuition 
          
          Harem:Whole female characters(taimanin rpgx & taimanin asagi battle arena)
          
          New multiple chapters(without discontinued hiatus on hold or cancelled)
          New updates(without slow updates or long updates)
          New lemon scenes(18+/lemons/mature/hentai)
          
          Here you go @Your_Hiro_016 it's all yours

Rusian02

Goos story's! btw where's Zero Two?

Your_Hiro_016

@Rusian02 Something like that, maybe she found literally any body of water and decided to swim. For a day.
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Rusian02

@Rusian02 Hmmm that's kinda sus maybe craving for Honey?
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Hans_Potterman

I wish my story got as much attention as yours.

Your_Hiro_016

@Der_Chancellor Your story is charming, I like it. Ways I think it could be improved are mostly personal preference, but: slow down the pacing, take time to describe your surroundings, even if it means less movement. Also, the grammar Nazi in me wants to check your floorboards, so maybe a little work on that. Either way, give your story time, mine didn't get any attention until well after I was like 5 chapters in. 
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Hans_Potterman

@Your_Hiro_016 Thanks but, do you have any advice for my book? Like how I can get more people to see it? Also I type the story on mobile so your praise is like basking in the heat of a fire during the winter season.
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Your_Hiro_016

@Der_Chancellor Male reader inserts will always win, I do like the concept of your story though (as a man of history)
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Your_Hiro_016

A new chapter of "The First Human Fallen" is coming veryyy soon 
          
          I know it's been very long, maybe too long- definitely too long since I've released a chapter for anything, but I'm definitely getting more invested. Destiny 2 is crawling back into my heart 
          
          I just wish I had some others to do the raids and high level stuff with 
          
          Expect more frequent updates, and a few new books I've been writing for fun as I got interested in the topic. 

Hans_Potterman

@Your_Hiro_016  I would gladly join once i get online again
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ktosikktosi

@ Your_Hiro_016  yay!
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itachithesavage175

@Your_Hiro_016 cool dude it has been long but glad your ok you know how it is poeple usually think a author is dead or something when they dont update there story and what console do you have maybe we can play destiny 2 together all tho I dont my mic right now
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