Your_Next_Door_Idiot

@BiloboJooho Just finished it. Was in class so it took some extra time. You saw my comments on the chapter, but I also loved that we got to see Stefan, Bonnie and Elena's POVs after the Caroline thing.

@Your_Next_Door_Idiot lmao yeah I’m based in the United States!

Just finished it, got a little is side tracked but finished it. I am absolutely loving it so far! And the smut scene was amazing, the writing like all your writing was just perfect. I am loving that we got a better Vicki and absolutely loved it when he beat Tyler up, idiot honestly deserved it. Loving the addiction of Klaus as well to the poly❤️ But I do hope Matt gets it on with a few more Mikaelson brothers, and I hope he doesn’t touch Marcel, cuz I hate him honestly. As always keep you the amazing work!

Just woke up after 16 hours, so I haven’t gotten to reading it, will do it right now and get back to you. Side note: I have come to the realization that we live in completely different time zones. But it is also nice to have something for when i wake up❤️

@BiloboJooho just reread the introduction since you changed it, and I absolutely adore it!❤️❤️❤️ I love that we got to see into Medusas past and how the OC came to be. I especially love it that Medusa loves her son even though he was conceived during a terrible moment in her life. I love the insight we get into her and why she sent away her son, considering most authors would just write a small line a never really emotion it again. Keep up the amazing work❤️❤️❤️

I loved it, amazing job as always❤️ I really loved the gif of the hellhounds in the beginning. I also loved that he learned who one of his parents were, instead of being left in the dark about it. And I always love a reborn fanfic. And remember to try and not force yourself to write something you don’t want to, you’ll just end up being more disappointed then proud.

Mb I meant introduction!! Sorry!

@BiloboJooho I love the idea of there simply being more Bennetts around. They are a powerful and old bloodline, but for some reason, there aren't any Bennetts around as far as we know other than Lucy and Bonnie (I don't count Bonnie's mother). But I am unsure about Josephine becoming something of a child/familiar. In my mind, a child and a familiar are like two opposites: a child is for you to protect, while a familiar is to protect you. Maybe she can be a familiar that is sometimes treated like a child? Like I said, I'm unsure on that one, so just do what makes you the most comfortable and what you like the sound of the most.

I was think of having Elias help the Bennett witches stop the hellfire and make more Bennett Oc’s running round the world especially mystic falls, and Elias is a Bennett all but blood. Also since Josephine is a basal giving her a human form and she basically becomes his first child/familiar.  

I have read that story twice, and loved it. I really wish I could, but since this is my last year of VGS school (it’s what we have before our version of college), plus my job and my own books, which I have some in the making that I’m super excited about. I unfortunately don’t have the time. But I hope you the best and good luck❤️❤️❤️❤️ But may I suggest that no matter what, keep the parental bond Elisa and Finn has with Kai. I truly loved the idea of Kai getting a family that truly loves him and he has that with them. I love that Elise and Finn are his dads and when Kai calls them that my heart always melted with joy. And I do hope Kai will have an amazing relationship with the feast of the Mikaelsons❤️❤️❤️ If you have any ideas or thoughts, please feel free to pass it on to me if you would like a second opinion❤️❤️

@BiloboJooho thx❤️

I don’t do requests for entire books, but if you have an idea for something in a book, then you can share the idea