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@TIMEMASTER101 
            
            Yes.

@YryllMiaStudios123 just a recommendation

@TIMEMASTER101 
            
            Understandable
            
            Anyways if your going to take something eldritch again like someone gazing to something PAINFUL, just use repetition.
            
            It hurts
            
            Yet can't feel anything
            
            It hurts
            
            And senses ceased to function
            
            It hurts
            
            Sense of self is forgotten.
            
            It hurts.
            It hurts. It hurts.
            It hurts. It hurts. It hurts.
            It hurts. It hurts. It hurts.
            IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. IT HURTS. 
            
            ....
            
            ....
            
            And the pour soul has ceased to exist.
            
            

@TIMEMASTER101 
            
            I'm going to be honest, I only have one problem, and it's Callahan's action when he interacted with Kailea(after he got saved from being erased by Yarelious)
            
            It's just, that his dialogue dosnt seem to feel like it belonged to a man who just gazed to something eldritch...
            and also I expected a lot of r@c+st words, not that I'm racist but I feel like those words just add some kind of depth, 
            
            Overall, the new chap is enjoyable, 
            
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What are my thoughts?
            
            It was a good start, got a new insights on:
            
            How the Theocracy works.
            What are the Austronesia's thoughts about the Theocracy,
            
            So keep cooking Author sama