Ysl491

So, I recently thought of an idea that I wanna share with you guys to get some feedback, I think I'm finally getting coming back to writing, and I had this concept that I'm making into a story, an ORIGINAL story, too. So, the idea is, there's this girl, she's kind of a bitch, she bullies people, beats people up for fun, and she gets powers, at first she uses them to do stuff like robbing stores, but eventually, she starts accidentally saving people, and slowly becomes a hero, and the story's kinda similar to Invincible in the fact that it's a deconstruction of Superheroes, but it's also a lot more mythologized in certain areas, and it also kinda takes inspiration from things like Dragon Ball in some areas, it's a very insane story that I think has a lot of potential.

Ysl491

@Ysl491 Just to know, the story's called "Skybound".
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Ysl491

So, I recently thought of an idea that I wanna share with you guys to get some feedback, I think I'm finally getting coming back to writing, and I had this concept that I'm making into a story, an ORIGINAL story, too. So, the idea is, there's this girl, she's kind of a bitch, she bullies people, beats people up for fun, and she gets powers, at first she uses them to do stuff like robbing stores, but eventually, she starts accidentally saving people, and slowly becomes a hero, and the story's kinda similar to Invincible in the fact that it's a deconstruction of Superheroes, but it's also a lot more mythologized in certain areas, and it also kinda takes inspiration from things like Dragon Ball in some areas, it's a very insane story that I think has a lot of potential.

Ysl491

@Ysl491 Just to know, the story's called "Skybound".
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PansGame

How have you been

Ysl491

@PansGame Thanks, you do too. 
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PansGame

@Ysl491 that's ok. Tell your mom a happy mother's day
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Ysl491

@PansGame Sorry I didn't reply for a while, Wattpad kinda glitched me out of the app for a couple days for some reason, it happens kinda frequently... But, I'll say it now, the concept is overall pretty good, the only thing I don't really like the harem aspect, since I honestly don't care for harems, but that's just a subjective thing, it overall sounds pretty good.
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Ysl491

So uh, I know this is like... A long time coming, by a long shot but uh... I'm doing the Invincible story, now... Sorry I haven't for a year... A lot of stuff has been happening, but, I'm trying to get back on track... I finished the first chapter, I'll gonna do the second chapter and release them both simultaneously. 

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So, sorry I haven't posted anything since... Well, last year, a lot of shit has been happening... Some of which I don't really wanna talk about... But I just wanted to ask, what story do the most of you guys feel needs an update the most? Because I seriously need to update something, and I think I can finally do it...

Ysl491

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Sorry I haven't been on here for a while, I've been dealing with my history teacher, but I just gotta say, fuck my landlord, this place is just a straight firehazard, I have to live in a room with no electricity, no heating, no nothing aside from internet because of that fuck. I'm gonna fucking freeze to death if I'm not somewhere else soon. Fucking slumlord piece of shit could've killed everyone with his shitty wiring, and anytime my mother tries to talk to him about it, he yells at her. FUCK. HIM. He could be sued for this shit if someone rich enough knew about it.

Aang456

Yo bro do you have tiktok or sum?

Aang456

How much follower do you have so I can know whichone.Also my name is Aerohead on there
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Ysl491

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Holy fucking Christ, if this is what a migraine feels like, no wonder my brother couldn't he at school when he had one, it feels like someone hit me in the headwith a goddamn baseball bat! Dear God, I can barely walk without feeling like I'm gonna puke... I'm definitely staying home today...

Redfury75

@Ysl491 Yeah, well, I hope not, you don't have it. I had to go to a physiotherapist and he told me it would be chronic and I'd have to live with it. I went to an osteopath twice; he cracked my joints, but It doesn't hurt at all when he does it, and since then it's been fine, I don't have anything anymore. However, the osteopath really knocks me out, lol.
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Ysl491

@Redfury75 Yeah, it's crazy how much things that seem simple can hurt, a migraine, on the surface, just sounds like a really bad headache, but it hurts so much worse than that. I've never had a stiff neck, but I can imagine it hurts a lot.
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Redfury75

@Ysl491 Yeah, I can imagine the worst pain I've ever had was a stiff neck. I wake up, stretch, and crack! The pain was so intense I couldn't scream or move.
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JLeslie2002

hey @Ysl491 do you think you would cotinue writing your Batman male reader x mcu story?

JLeslie2002

@Ysl491 I understand that I can also relate as well, just take your time 
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Ysl491

@JLeslie2002 I think so. Some stuff has happened recently, and I'm trying to deal with some stress.
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