So, a little update for chapter 2, I changed Takahashi to Sammy because Sammy has more Character Lore than Takahashi - and I also fixed some paragraph problems as well. Sorry about not noticing it sooner.
So, a little update for chapter 2, I changed Takahashi to Sammy because Sammy has more Character Lore than Takahashi - and I also fixed some paragraph problems as well. Sorry about not noticing it sooner.
Changed the timeline in Chapter 1 and added more information, I did improve the character description so that's good.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/297089794