Hi I'm Lilly, Mackie's friend, I read your book and I just want to say I love your writing style and there were no grammatical mistakes I could see, overall great job, look forward to reading more!
@blink182fan14 I can't take full credit for the writing style. Most of it came from my friend Audrey. I just wrote the parts she got stuck on, as well as did final revision and edits to the story. All though I would like to take some credit I can not.